100 Word Challenge - Week 19
It was a dark, terrifying and scary night. The streets
were vacant, except for one Philadelphia parking authority officer named Rodrigo.
He was the only one brave enough to give a ticket to Roger, the toughest guy in
town who always parked in a handicapped spot. Roger parked in that same spot
every day and Rodrigo gave him a three hundred and one dollar ticket every
night. Roger was fed up. So on that
night he decided to stalk Rodrigo and put an end to all of these tickets. After that gloomy night Rodrigo was never ever
heard from again.
Nice work, my class loved the fact that you made fun of the PPA. good job making to the showcase.
ReplyDeleteGood use of different sentences, you used a variety to create an air of mystery.
ReplyDeleteI love the word choice you used.
ReplyDeleteAmazing.I love how you made fun of the ppa
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you entered the 100 word challenge
ReplyDeleteI loved how you made fun of the PPA
ReplyDeleteJerrad well done on an excellent piece of writing. You have an excellent sentences for your opening and they really capture the attention of the reader. I was not expecting the ending and would love to know what actually happened?
ReplyDeleteMaybe i'll write a sequel that tells the story of what happened to Rodrigo!
DeleteThis made me want to read more great story, and awesome chois of words(:
ReplyDeletestory needs a s and chois is spelled choice.
DeleteThis made me want to read more great story, and awesome chois of words(:
ReplyDeleteStory needs a s and chois is spelled choice.
DeleteThanks for reading.